Not logged in

Please login with username, password and session length or register.


Advanced search  
Pages: [1] 2 3

Author Topic: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)  (Read 35271 times)

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« on: October 27, 2009, 12:30:37 pm »

Gwynzer knows I have been listening to the audio book of the new Star Wars 'horror' novel DeathTroopers. Inspired by the story I've decided to write a short fan fiction setting it in the First Strike community. Who better to play the parts of the infected undead attempting to spread the virus' influence and control than BI!

Thought I best post it here cause I know the sense of humour police regard any and all posts by me as herecy in the face of Black Intel.

Oh, if any of the none FS players like Star Wars then some more of my short stories can be found on the First Strike forums. If this post hasn't been deleted and Gwynzer feels up to it he may even link to them to make it easy for you to find them. Be warned though...they also feature Black Intel member references, in one story one of you even deliberately 'team kills' someone. Sorry about that, didn't realise it was a sore point  ;D

As the saying goes, if you can't laugh at yourself who can you laugh at?  :D


**EDIT**

I'll go ahead and post each piece up as it's complete. Whats your age classification, not that there'll be any swearing, just don't want to give you kids nightmares  :P
« Last Edit: October 27, 2009, 07:33:52 pm by Twigs »
Logged

Gwynzer

  • PS2 Game Leader
  • Staff
  • Mammoth Tank driver
  • ******
  • Offline
  • Posts: 2184
  • BloodyNoob Handler and Mating Expert
Logged
Quote from: TK2 Ban Policy
ur gut feelings are good enough.

Quote from: Ren BI1
Gwynzer@IRC: PENIS
shippo: sigh
lavakill: he always ruins everything

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2009, 05:42:33 pm »

Null Specter Station.

Chapter One. Alone

The armoured convoy slowed and came to a stop at the foot of the winding mountain pass, the hum and whine of their repulsor engines echoing back from the towering rocky faces around them. The setting sun had already dipped below the peaks of the cliffs, throwing the valley in to cold dark shadow. There was no other sound, even though the T1-B gun turrets continuously scanned for resistance, there was no evidence of the Imperial presence expected.

Benu checked the sensor scans from the rear of the armoured Freerunner, other than his own vehicle and the rest of the rebel attack group around him the area was clear.
“Maybe it’s a trap.” He thought to himself, “I bet the pass is mined and a kill zone prepped.”

He relayed the sensor detail to the rest of the armoured column before reaching up and opening a com frequency.

“Sir, still no sign of enemy activity here, maybe it’s a trap.”

“Perhaps, stay alert and secure the area. We’ve finished up here and we’re going to advance up the service shaft to the top. Once we’re up we’ll recce the pass and guide you in.”

Out of range of the other rebel forces sensors, Gwynzer closed off the com. Around him stood a small squad of soldiers, each one hand picked by him for their individual talents. He considered them the best the Alliance could offer and he’d spent a lot of time in the field with them. Even now they were checking power levels in weapons and securing their kit, all the time scanning the Imperial landing platform for any sign of enemy troopers.

Towering above them, the dark grey service shaft beckoned, its single entrance appearing like a black mouth ready to eat them whole. If it was a trap, this would be where he and his forces were likely to face it. He blew out sharply, readying himself for the task ahead.

“Move out guys and stay alert, those Imperial scum are waiting up there for us and we need to guide Benu’s tank group up. Samzi, keep that med pack handy I don’t want to lose anyone.”

“Don’t worry about it boss,” grinned the medic, “I gotcha covered.”

“Alright then, move forward, deploy UAV’s and keep chatter to a minimum.”

The six men moved forward, watchful, silent and deadly, disappearing in to the black maw of the service shaft. The landing platform once again was silent, except for the drip, drip, drip of pooling liquid around some abandoned crates. Dark, red and completely unnoticed by the rebels.

Benu felt isolated. He’d volunteered as the groups sensor officer even though he hated to leave Gwynzers squad without his expertise. A slicer with many years experience hacking Imperial systems, he’d proven himself more than once when the group needed him. Checking the scans once more he cracked open the Freerunners hatch and stepped out.

“Still nothing,” he called out, “I’m taking a breather while Black group cover the distance to the top.”

Other rebel troops had already started to relax and one officer called back to him, “Sure thing, nothing here anyway. You sure this thing is occupied? Still under construction isn’t it? Maybe they took a break and went home.”

“Imperials don’t just abandon something as big as this,” Benu answered sauntering over and reaching out for a protein bar, “Trust me, they’ll be waiting up there somewhere. I just hope the rest of the guys….Gwynzers guys, don’t meet any trouble on the way up.”

“You’re part of his team aren’t you?” asked the Officer, removing his helmet before setting it on the ground to use as a small stool. “How come you didn’t stick with them?”

Benu shrugged, “Sensor officer fell sick and I volunteered to take his place. The area’s compact enough that we can cover 60% of it with one Freerunner so Gwynzer agreed.”

“Black Intel…sounds like some sort of Imperial project, how’d you get that name?” The man peered up at him, chewing a mouthful of something before swallowing it noisily.

“Well, guess you could say we do the jobs no-one else wants to do. You want something from an Imp facility, we’ll get you it. I’m Benu by the way.”

“Krenyo,” answered the officer, reaching up a hand in greeting, “I may not be your usual boss, but don’t worry. I know the intel reports, might as well know this place like my old stomping ground. Through the pass, one more minor installation then on to the main facility, I’ll get us through this.”

Benu nodded and studied him. He looked sincere enough, smart too. Even had that look Gwynzer sometimes got, as if he merely had to imagine success to achieve it.

“I better get back, check the sensors and listen out for them.”

“Sure thing, if you need anything just holler. This place is dead anyway.”
« Last Edit: November 02, 2009, 07:07:35 pm by Twigs »
Logged

EvilWhiteDragon

  • Founder
  • Staff
  • Mammoth Tank driver
  • ******
  • Offline
  • Posts: 1806
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2009, 06:35:48 pm »

Well written Twigs, I like the way you write.
Logged
"It is important to find a balance. It is easier for parents if they set ground rules from the start about how long their child is allowed to spend on these types of games." - Only one line of cocaine a day, dear son!

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2009, 07:30:40 pm »

Chapter Two. The First.

They were about halfway up now. Power had been cut off inside the tower and it was pitch black. The small windows inside completely covered by the shadows cast by the setting sun outside. Darkness surrounded at them and nagged at the back of their minds, thoughts of Stormtroopers lying in wait kept them wary. Still, the local sensor droids indicated no life inside the tower except them.

“Break here,” ordered Gwynzer, “quick drink of water and we’ll keep going.”

“Where are they boss?” asked Slyfox, a quiet unassuming guy yet deadly accurate with his A280.

“They’ll be around,” Ati, the squad’s heavy weapon specialist patted his rocket launcher like a pet, “and when they show up, BOOM!” He laughed and the rest of the guys joined in, happy to relieve some of the tension.

“Keep it down guys,” Gwynzer chided as he chuckled, “maybe they’ve got some sensor block operating.”

“Not a chance,” answered Thomas, “we’re still showing on the scans so it’s picking up alright.” As if to emphasise his point he showed Gwynzer a datapad and stabbed at their location. “See.”

“Yeah yeah,” Gwynzer snorted, slapping the pad away, “maybe it’s some sort of cloaking thing then. I dunno, either way it shouldn’t be this easy so just shut-up and pay attention.”

A scuffling noise reached them, faint but distinct in the tall tower’s dark imposing structure. It stopped, replaced by the clang of a falling object, seemingly coming to a rest on the catwalk directly above them. The group immediately fell silent and looked up, peering through the void trying to make out the source.

“Thomas..” whispered Gwynzer

“Nothing boss,” came the reply, “I’ll check it out.”

Before Gwynzer could tell him to wait, Thomas sprinted ahead up the rising ramp, footsteps echoing back towards them as he advanced. They waited, gauging the reckless soldier’s progress as his steps changed in frequency indicating how far he had progressed.

“Come on up,” he shouted back after a few moments, “nothing here.”

Gwynzer led them forward, blasters pointed upwards scanning for any threat. Ahead lay a pile of crates, positioned like some kind of makeshift barricade.

“BOO!” shouted Thomas, jumping out from behind the pile and throwing something at them. He laughed as Gwynzer dropped to his knees to avoid it and swung his weapon to bear. Samzi caught the object and studied it, a broken Stormtrooper helmet, the lenses smashed and its surface scored with scratches.

“Relax,” grinned Thomas, “I found that still rolling about, probably just a rodent knocking in to it.” He coughed, covering his mouth with his hand then wiping it down the front of his uniform.

“There’s some blood back here too, must have been some kid of accident. Maybe that’s why we haven’t seen anyone yet, they had an accident and went to get medcare.”

“Maybe,” muttered Gwynzer, he glanced at Samzi who shrugged his shoulders in return, “well at least it proves there’s someone, or was someone, around.”

He made his way over to the crates and peered over, blood covered the area and pooled in the corner of the ramp. Thomas indicated round him, “See, must be an accident, something probably came to have a sniff and disturbed the helmet.” He coughed again, a deep hacking cough that caused him to double over.

“You alright?” asked the squad leader, reaching over and thumping him on the back.

“I was,” groaned Thomas, “until you tried the beat my lungs out.”

Gwynzer shrugged and looked him in the eyes, “One last thing.”

“Whats that chief?”

Gwynzer punched him in the jaw sending him sprawling to the floor. “You ever pull that cacking stuff again during an op and I’ll shoot you myself.”

Thomas laughed and pushed himself up, then collapsed again in another coughing fit. “Some...people have no sense of humour” he gasped.

“Samzi, take a look at him, he doesn’t look too good.” Gwynzer waved the medic forward as he frowned over Thomas’ hacking form.

“Don’t know what I can do Sir,” said the medic, running sensor scans over Thomas who continued to cough and seemed unable or unwilling to get to his feet, “no sign of infection, no bio hazard warnings in the air. Maybe it’s just an allergy to something.”

“Yeah, I’m allergic to Imp’s” cackled Thomas again before another coughing fit sent him into spasms.

Samzi flinched and covered his own face as Thomas coughed over him, feeling something wet hit him with each one. He looked down, blood. Lots of blood.

“This isn’t an allergy,” he said, injecting Thomas with some basic anti-virals, “maybe some new chemical weapon, I don’t know. I can’t treat this here.”

“If it’s some new weapon why haven’t we picked up anything, and why aren’t we all feeling the effects?” Blind, the support trooper, moved forward. Despite his name, he had the best eyes of anyone and could manoeuvre through the dark as easily as in daylight.

“Whatever it is its acting fast,” snapped Samzi, unpacking more equipment as Thomas continued to worsen, “his lungs are filling with blood, he’s drowning.”

“Can’t you drain it?” said Gwynzer, putting his weapon on the crates and kneeling down to assist the medic.

“No good unless I can stop the haemorrhaging.” He answered, “He’s going to bleed out before..”

The small bio scans shrilled as Thomas’s life signs stopped. Samzi sagged back in disbelief and shock, he’d done everything he could with the small field pack, but he felt helpless.

“Samzi. Samzi!” Gwynzer shook him and pushed something in to his hands. “Defib him!”

Samzi shook his head. “No use. Whatever it is I can’t treat it and he’s lost too much blood.”

He leaned forward and propped Thomas on to his side, giving the appearance of someone asleep, asleep that is apart from the dark blood that slowly dripped from his mouth as it drained.

“Ati, Blind, cover the walkway ahead, Sly go cover the rear” ordered Gwynzer as he stood and reached for his blaster without looking, his hands instinctively closing over its familiar pistol grip. The men nodded silently and silently slipped away, the darkness swallowing them whole.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2009, 07:08:10 pm by Twigs »
Logged

Thomas45

  • Senior Member
  • Technician
  • ****
  • Offline
  • Posts: 246
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #5 on: October 27, 2009, 07:40:38 pm »

I'm dead  :o
Logged
Quote
The other Scottish guy who is actually Irish

Gwynzer

  • PS2 Game Leader
  • Staff
  • Mammoth Tank driver
  • ******
  • Offline
  • Posts: 2184
  • BloodyNoob Handler and Mating Expert
Logged
Quote from: TK2 Ban Policy
ur gut feelings are good enough.

Quote from: Ren BI1
Gwynzer@IRC: PENIS
shippo: sigh
lavakill: he always ruins everything

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2009, 09:15:07 pm »

Chapter 3. Scream.

Benu twitched nervously in his seat. There was still nothing showing on the sensor scans and there’d been no word from Gwynzer. “Relax,” he told himself, “it’ll take them longer than that to get in to position. They’ll call if there’s a problem.”

The instrument panel before him beeped and startled him from his thoughts, “Yes Sir?”

“Ben, we lost Thomas.” Gwynzers voice sounded tinny through the electronic scrubbers, but he could still pick up a trace of emotion through it.

“What? How?” Benu asked, his own shock evident.

“He got sick, real quick. No sign of any bio hazards or chemical spill and the rest of us seem ok. Maybe some new weapon the Imperials have deployed, I don’t know. Sam doesn’t know of anything natural that acts that fast.”

“Maybe you should pull back boss.”

“We found what looks like some kind of accident, Thomas did… There was blood on the floor and Thomas must have touched it, maybe that was the carrier. Samzi has given the rest of us a clean sweep and we’ve medically scrubbed anything that came in to contact with it. We should be ok, don’t think it’s an airborne virus.”

“Gwyn, I’d fell better if you just got out of there. Something doesn’t feel right.”

“Just hole up down there Ben, get in the vehicles, seal the hatches and treat it like a bio attack until we find out more. Samzi can’t find any trace of anything foreign, so like I said I don’t think it’s airborne.”

“Boss,”

Gwynzer cut him off before he could continue, “Follow orders soldier. We have a mission and we WILL complete it.”

“Aye Sir.” Answered Benu, then closed the frequency down. Gwynzer was wrong, he could feel it. He stepped out of the hatch again and turned, almost bumping in to Krenyo and some of the other men in the armour column.

“Everything alright Ben, you look a little pale.” Krenyo looked at him quizzically, a flicker of concern showing across his features.

“Black Intel. They lost a man.”

“They had a contact? Why didn’t they call in?”

Benu shook his head. “Not a contact. He got sick. Fast. Maybe something Imperial, a weapon. The others are fine, Gwynzer doesn’t think it’s airborne but said we should seal up and treat for bio attack.”

Krenyo mulled it over for a moment before nodding. “Ok, everyone climb aboard your vehicle, seal in and activate full air scrubbing.”

The men immediately obeyed, climbing on and into T1-Bs, APC Freerunners and Mortar Freerunners. Engines fired up and hummed as the systems activated, while door seals hissed closed, perfectly cutting the men off from any outside contamination.

“It’s getting dark anyway Ben,” Krenyo addressed the ashen faced young slicer and threw an arm over his shoulder, “Come on, me and Impy here will keep you company.”

The name threw Ben and he considered it for an instant as he and Krenyo clambered aboard. “Impy?”

“Former Stormy. I defected a while back but some things just stick ya know.” The man answered Ben’s question gruffly as he swung the hatch shut behind them. “Don’t worry junior, I been on the right team for a couple years now.”

The remark was enough to make Ben grin again as he swung his chair back to face the bank of screens and data terminals, “Ok old timer, well try to keep up. I don’t think we got anything big enough to carry your wrinkly old frame up there.”

Krenyo smiled at the remark and glanced over to Impy who caught the look and nodded before he reached over and playfully cuffed Benu. “The kid’ll be alright,” thought Krenyo, “Impy knows how to size the new guys up.”

Outside, the sky flared to bright red as the sun threw one last effort to light the landscape before sinking below the horizon. Night drew quickly, engulfing everything in darkness. No lights could be seen from any of the Imperial installations and no moon hung in the sky. Clouds obscured the distant stars, as if conspiring with the elements to lock the surface in darkness.


Ati and Blind stood silent guard in the towers walkway. Below them Gwynzer and Samzi finished cleaning up the area where Thomas had passed away. They had removed all his weapons and Gwynzer tucked away a small letter. He made every member of his squad write one before any operation, in case anything happened it was something that could be sent to a loved one. That final goodbye you could never make in person.

Samzi had already moved off to rejoin the others, and Gwynzer was ready to move on. “Sorry pal,” he whispered, resting a hand on Thomas’s shoulder and gripping it, “we’ll come back for you. I promise.” He gave it one last shake and squeezed his eye’s shut, forcing back the tears and gritting his teeth against the rising lump sticking in his throat. He stood and threw a final salute then turned on his heal and headed off through the never ending darkness to find his men.

“Boss,” whispered Ati, “I’ve spread the heavy gear around, I’ll take Thomas’s A280, should be more effective than the launcher, specially in these corridors.”

“Aye,” said Gwynzer, “Good idea, but I want you to keep the shield, any trouble that’s the first thing you use, we’ll cover you.”

“You got it sir,” answered Ati, “still no sign of anything moving up ahead.”

“Ok, before we move any further I want everyone on masks, no point taking a risk.” Even as he said it Gwynzer was already reaching for his own respirator, a small personal filter that would scrub the air of any germ or chemical and render it safe to the user.

He opened a localised com channel back to Slyfox instructing him to do the same adding, “Hold tight for the moment, we’re still sorting things out up here.”

The others were fastening the masks around their faces, securing the harnesses to ensure a tight seal against the skin when Blind cursed. “Must have dropped it getting over those crates. Be right back Sir, sorry.” He slipped back down the ramp towards Thomas to retrieve the item while the others checked each other and made sure each mask was properly fitted.

“Hurry up!” Gwynzer called to him as he sank from view, “we need to make up some time.” Ati coughed behind him and he and Samzi spun in alarm, the medic already pulling out his medpack.

Blind barely heard the muffled noises behind him as he strode back to the crates. He could already make them out in the gloom, a bundle on the floor beside them marked Thomas’s lifeless form. He advanced quicker now, eager to retrieve his mask and get back to the group. Even though that had been a friend on the floor, dead bodies made him twitchy. He flicked on a small penlight, one specially designed for covert op’s with a dim yellow light that gave everything a sickly pale tone. There it was, on the floor near Thomas’s foot.

“They could have picked it up for me,” he scowled to himself and reached forward, “lazy hutts probably didn’t do a proper search before they left.”

The foot twitched. He shrank back in alarm, “Thomas?” The bundle on the floor remained motionless, “Easy now,” thought Blind, “it’s just your mind playing tricks. When you moved the light the shadows moved, that’s all. Just get the mask and get out of here.”

He reached forward again and heard it. A shallow, almost inaudible, rasping sound. He stopped, his hand still outstretched and cocked his head to listen. It was coming from that, thing, he couldn’t think of the corpse as Thomas, his friend wasn’t in there now. Samzi said he was dead, he had to be. Samzi never made mistakes. The foot moved and this time so did the head. Blind fell backwards in shock,

“Samzi! Boss!” he shouted, “He’s still alive!”

Thomas was moving a little more now and Blind rushed forward to prop him up, “Easy mate, they’re coming back for you now. Those Imp’s must have a sensor block running after all, Samzi’s bio scans said you were dead.”

Thomas moaned as the rasping heavy breathing in his chest quickened.

“Whats that buddy? Didn’t catch it, just take it easy. Whisper it, you need to save your breath.” Blind dipped his head and placed his ear close to Thomas’s mouth to try and catch the feeble words. His sick friend reached up with both hands and gripped Blinds head tightly. Too tightly. And they felt cold. He tried to pull away from them as Thomas opened his mouth again. Blind could feel his hot fetid breath against his cheek, it smelt terrible, the copper tang of blood assaulting his sense of smell.

“Easy pal, I’m...Aaarrrrrrrrrrrgghh!” Blind screamed as Thomas lunged forward and sank his teeth deep in to his neck. Sharp points punctured through skin and in to his windpipe cutting off the sound as blood seeped from the open wound. Thomas pulled back and tore a section from Blinds throat, whose eye’s widened in disbelief and shock. He could see in to Thomas’s eye’s now, there was no one behind them. This wasn’t his friend, no soul occupied the body that gripped him. The thing opened it’s mouth again and Blind screamed in silent terror as it tore back in to his throat.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2009, 07:09:10 pm by Twigs »
Logged

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2009, 10:56:33 pm »

Chapter 4. Alive.

They all heard Blind calling them then his strangled scream being cut off. Samzi already had Ati on the floor, desperately trying to find the cause of the infection as he coughed and writhed around.

“I’ll go check it out,” said Gwynzer, already starting towards source of the commotion, “get hold of Ben, let him know something’s wrong and do what you can for Ati.”

Samzi waved him off and concentrated on the patient, watching the bio scans marking the rapid deterioration in Ati’s fight for survival. There was nothing wrong! No viral signature, no chem hazard, nothing that would point to a reason behind the strange disease that now seemed to stalk them one by one. Ati lurched to the side in another coughing fit. Samzi had lit a glowrod and in the dim light he could make out the glistening wet blobs. Blood. Just like Thomas, Ati’s lungs were filling with blood. He reached to the medpack and grabbed a long tube and inserted it to Ati’s mouth, pushing it down deep within the mans respiratory system. The fluid filling him began to drain out and his coughing abated a little. Samzi had bought some time to cure the illness, but only a little.

Gwynzer ran towards the crates, grabbing a powerful torch and illuminating the path ahead. The beam lit them up like something from a childhood nightmare. Thomas sat bolt upright, cradling Blind in his arms and feasting on the flesh around a gaping neck wound. One of Blinds legs twitched in spasm and Gwynzer could see the blood around the hole welling up, fresh and bubbling. Blinds lungs feebly moved in and out.

Thomas was eating him alive!

“STOP!” he screamed, raising a blaster and aiming at Thomas.

Silence fell again as the echoes died away, only to be replaced by a sickly squishing noise as he drove his head further in to Blinds throat. He pulled away and turned to look at Gwynzer, his jaws still working while pieces of flesh hung from his lips and bright red blood covered his face. His skin was a sickly grey as if already rotten. He threw back his head and howled, a menacing terrifying noise that caused the hair on Gwynzers neck to prick up and seemed to suck the very air from his lungs. High above them came an answering scream, but this one came back louder, much louder.

The weapon in his hands shook as fear gripped him in an icy hold and chilled his core. “Thomas!” he pleaded, the words coming in a terrified shakey whisper as the thing before him tore once more in to Blind. Above, another screaming howl echoed towards him followed by another from deep below in the bowels of the tower. Thomas turned to look once more then screamed back as if challenging him. It pushed Blind away and stood before moving towards him, salivating and drooling.

As soon as he heard the screams Samzi keyed the com, “Ben!”

“Samzi? Wheres the boss?” he answered, puzzled at the break in the chain of command.

“He went to check on Blind, Ati’s sick now too and… I don’t know. We’re not alone here.” Samzi cleared his throat nervously, he felt silly telling Ben he was frightened, but he didn’t know what else to tell him. “I think we’re trapped, I don’t know if we’ll make it. Maybe you should track back.”

“Samzi, you’re the medic right?” a new voice came over the channel, it seemed calmer, in control.

“Who is this?” asked Samzi as he pulled open Ati’s tunic with a spare hand to check his chest.

“I’m Captain Krenyo, I’m leading the armoured column. What can you tell me about this illness? I need a full sitrep.”

“Sir, I can’t tell you anything, the scans pick up no infection, no hazards in the air...”

“Ok, what about the forces in the tower with you, how many Imperial troops?” Krenyo interjected.

“I don’t know, they don’t show on any of the sensor scans. Sir, I don’t think they’re Imperials.”

“Ok, regroup and get out and back to the LZ. I’m pushing the column forward. That sensor station must be destroyed.” Krenyo closed the channel and Samzi was left once more alone with his patient. Ati’s chest heaved up and down in the glowsticks light and as he watched something seemed to move inside, writhing under the skin. Ati’s flesh was turning grey, Samzi could see it moving up, changing from healthy fleshy pink to the sickly pallor.

The screams echoed through the tower once more.

Back near the crates Gwynzer dropped the light he was carrying and took hold of his blaster with both hands, trying to still the twitching weapon as the cries chilled him once more. Thomas lumbered towards him, that hungry mouth gnashing in glee at the prospect of another feast. “What the Sith Thomas, come on! You know me!” He still pleaded with him, yet deep down he knew that there was only one way this could end, kill or be killed.

Thomas lunged and snarled, a bright flash smashing in to his chest and throwing him backwards as Gwynzer pulled the trigger. At close range the weapon burst a hole straight through his chest and exposed flesh and bone. It twitched again then flopped to one side before lifting those dead eyes back to look at Gwynzer.

“Impossible!” he gasped, “Impossible!”

It outstretched an arm and began to try to crawl towards him, a bloody smear creeping across the floor as it edged forwards. Gwynzer took aim carefully and snapped off a single shot to Thomas’s head, twisting the corpse round as the shot struck home and obliterated it. This time it stayed still. Blind had stopped breathing and the howling echoed through the tower once more. Gwynzer bent over and vomited on the walkway, pausing until he was sure his stomach could take another look at the scene near the crates. Two of his friends were now definitely dead, one from his own doing, the other from something he still couldn’t understand.

“Gwynzer!” came a voice in the darkness, “we got to leave, NOW!”
« Last Edit: November 02, 2009, 07:09:34 pm by Twigs »
Logged

Slyfox

  • Senior Member
  • Medium Tank driver
  • ****
  • Offline
  • Posts: 846
  • Jedi Master
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #9 on: October 27, 2009, 11:49:29 pm »

Your writing was and still is amazing! This story keeps me on edge.

What if we made some models of dead and have 'em attack the Rebs? Like on a dark and dirty version of Null.  :o
Logged

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #10 on: October 28, 2009, 10:19:41 am »

Chapter five. The Past.

At the foot of the mountain pass, the hum of repulsorlifts from the collection of rebel vehicles was a gentle reassurance of life on what so far had been a dead planet. Inside the APC Freerunner Krenyo’s face appeared pale, lit by the bank of screens at Benu’s workstations. Beside him, Impy sat bolt upright, his body locked rigid and his eyes wide with fright.

“Impy?” said Ben, reaching over and shaking him, “hey whats wrong?”

Krenyo turned and frowned, he’d never seen the man like this. He ignored it for the time being and opened another frequency to address the armour column.

“The Black Intel group have run in to some problems and can’t scout the pass. We’re going to go in anyway while they fall back. Stick close and keep the APC centred in the group and remember to stay in the sensor bubble. Move them out.”

He felt the Freerunner surge forward, pushing him back a little in his seat as the sound from the engines increased in volume, the sudden pitching from the front marking the entrance to the pass. On the sensor screen the rebels were still the only echoes coming back to mark the presence of any sentient being.

He looked back at Impy. Benu knelt in front of him in concern, shaking his knee and trying to elicit some response.

“Impy!” Krenyo made the words sound like an order and the former Stormtrooper snapped his head round, eyes still wide with fear. “Talk to me soldier,” continued Krenyo, “report.”

“Leave.” Stammered Impy in a hoarse whisper, “Leave now. They’ll kill us all.”

Krenyo puzzled over the words, it wasn’t fear of the Imperials, he could sense that. It was something else, something the man had recognised. “Explain it to me, quickly. We’re already in the pass.”

Impy sagged his head forward and let out a heavy sigh, then told them what he knew.

“I was part of a clean up crew, one of the reasons I defected actually. We went to deal with an abandoned Star Destroyer, Vector.”

“Abandoned?” interrupted Krenyo incredulously, “by 10,000 crew?”

Impy nodded, “You could say that. Space around it was littered by dead ships and an old prison barge. They’d manufactured some kind of virus and it got out, infecting the crew. It’s different, it kills you then…” he shuddered. “It brings the dead back to life.”

Benu and Krenyo looked at each other in disbelief and Ben shook his head as if dismissing the idea.

“That’s impossible,” he said, “someone would have heard about it.”

Impy stared at him, “Oh it happened alright. We sent a boarding party to the Destroyer and they brought back a sample. To keep the crew safe they were kept in isolation as soon as they were brought back on, locked down in a cargo bay. They got infected, started feeding on one another until they all became…things. In the end we had to space them.”

“What happened to the other ships?” asked Krenyo, trying to decide if this was some kind of joke or not.

“We were part of a fleet. As soon as the boarding party got back everything was turned to slag, like cleansing with fire I guess. No real sign of anything other than a huge debris field now.”

There was a sudden jolt and the Freerunner pitched up and on to it’s side, throwing the three men round the sensor suite like toys. Alarms shrilled and echoed as the tank rolled and came to a stop upside down, smoke beginning to fill the air inside.

“Everyone out now!” the drivers urgency was clear over the internal com system. Krenyo coughed and reached out, activating the release mechanism for the door. It hissed as the seals deflated and mechanisms whirred as bolts released before it swung open letting the cool night air flood in. They scrambled out and ran forward to get some distance from it.

“Sorry sir,” said the driver, “The pass is pretty unstable, the nose just pitched up as we hit that rise and she rolled.” He indicated upwards and as he did the clouds parted a little allowing some starlight through. They could make out the small Imperial outpost ahead, two gun turrets and some firing pillars flanking each side of the pass as it snaked through.

“Can we get it moving again?” asked Krenyo indicating towards the downed tank, “We need those sensors.”

As if in answer, something ignited on the Freerunner and was followed by a small explosion, illuminating the area and sending a fireball high in to the air.

“I think that’s a no.” said Ben kicking the dirt and balling his fists in frustration.

“Did anyone get a sensor ping from the outpost?” asked Krenyo, weighing up the options and studying the silent and imposing Imperial building.

“There was nothing Sir,” answered Ben, “Its as dead as everywhere else.”

The other rebels had also dismounted, those that had the equipment to do so carried out short level scans, while a small group of medics took some air samples. “I can’t detect anything sir.” One of the medics shouted over to Krenyo, another hurried over to check them over. Other than a few minor scratches none of them had suffered any injuries.

“No-one in the outpost boss,” one of the foot soldiers reported, “I’ve thrown out a short range scan, should be good for another ten minutes before the power dies.”

“Ok guys,” acknowledged Krenyo, “Secure this one as well. Maybe we can find some answers inside.”

The screams reverberated off the rocky sides and bounced back at them, echoing again and again. Each man paled and looked up towards the source of the noise. The sensor dish dominated the sky line, its network of buildings clustered round it like black ghouls silhouetted against the night sky.

“They know we’re here,” whispered Impy, “it’s too late.” 

Krenyo was now starting to believe the mans story, yet he still felt the need to complete his mission. “The Freerunner is blocking the way anyway, take the three rear T1-B’s and head back to the LZ, we’ll take the rest and destroy that dish.”

Impy considered it and blew out, “I’ll come with you. There may be some survivors.”

“Survivors?” asked Ben, “I thought it was contagious?”

“It is.” Answered Impy, “but some people have natural immunity. You can still get infected though if one of those things bite you, least that’s how I remember being told about it.”

Krenyo stared. “Bite you?”

Impy nodded, “They feed on the living, the bodies become infected and then they…”

He shuddered. Thinking back to the images from the cargo bay as the men inside turned on one another and succumbed to the disease. The howling scream reverberated from the cliffs again. The rear section of the rebel convoy was already mounting up in preparation to head back, but each of them once again turned as the noise assaulted their senses.

Impy strode forward and unshouldered his weapon. “Come on,” he said, “lets get this over with.”

“Head back Ben,” said Krenyo, nudging the young man back, “you don’t need to go up there.”

“Yes I do.” He answered staunchly, squaring his shoulders and facing the officer. “I need to know what happened to them. To Gwynzer. They’re my friends.”

Impy shrugged. “His choice Sir, he can make his own decisions. One thing though Ben, I know it’s hard to believe until you see it, but if they are infected don’t think of them as friends. They’re dead and they’ll kill you so shoot first.”

He nodded and paled under the starlight before trudging forward towards the Imperial outpost. The group of T1-B’s behind them were already backing away down the pass, while the two tanks they had left at the front manoeuvred towards the small stack of buildings.

The howling echoed again. Closer.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2009, 07:10:09 pm by Twigs »
Logged

Ati

  • Senior Member
  • Patch
  • ****
  • Offline
  • Posts: 162
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #11 on: October 28, 2009, 01:53:00 pm »

Keep them coming Twigs, I love these stories! :)
Logged

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #12 on: October 28, 2009, 04:09:03 pm »

Chapter 6. No way out.

There was a new noise in the service tower now, a gentle echo that reverberated around the walls of the shaft. Muffled footsteps, scratching, it was difficult to describe but the source was both above and below them. Gwynzer crouched down to check on Ati as Samzi continued to try and treat him.

“Whats with his chest?” He asked, eyeing the bulbuous mass moving under the skin.

“I don’t know, it’s some kind of fluid. I’m trying to sample it now.”

Samzi already had a syringe with grey gelatinous liquid inside, drawn from Ati’s strange affliction. He scanned it with a portable medi-pad and frowned over the results.

“Looks like some kind of virus, but I don’t understand why I couldn’t detect it before. I’ve never seen anything like it, I’ll need better facilities to study it. Where’s Blind?”

“Dead,” Answered his Squad Leader, “Thomas attacked him and tore his throat out. He was… eating him.”

“What?” Samzi stared at Gwynzer, “Ate him? But Thomas was dead.”

Gwynzer shook his head, “I know I know but that’s what I saw. He tried to attack me to, I had to shoot him.”

“Boss, that’s impossible. He was dead. No life signs, I even checked his pulse myself in case it was a scanner malfunction.”

“Samzi, I know what I saw ok. Whatever happened to him probably affected the Imps too and by the sounds of it they’re coming to get us next.”

Something clanged from above, then again a little closer. Whatever it was it was falling from an upper level, striking against the walkways. It flashed past them, smacking against their platform as it continued down, a blur of white and red. A dark wet bloody smear indicated where it had hit and the two men glanced at each other.

“I think that was a Stormy.” Gwynzer said and Samzi nodded in agreement. Ati interrupted their thoughts with another sudden coughing fit, his chest rising up as his body went into spasm again. Samzi’s med pad shrilled a warning alarm. He was dead.

“Push him off the side.” Ordered Gwynzer, already grabbing the arms of his dead squadmate and pulling him to the edge.

“What?”

“I’m not taking any chances, Thomas was supposed to be dead too and he died of the same thing, now get him over the side.”

Samzi panicked, what if he wasn’t really dead? Maybe he could still help Ati. “Boss just wait, if he isn’t really dead then maybe I can do something. Maybe the virus shuts down the vital organs temporarily but leaves enough brain function to reanimate him.”

Gwynzer shook his head, still trying to drag the limp corpse to the side and down the central shaft. “He’s dead, whatever that thing is inside him has killed him alright, then it... I don’t know what it does but when he comes back it’s not Ati.”

Something clattered above, maybe a level or two over their heads and howled. The things that had them trapped joined it, a cacophony of shrieking chilling screams that made the walls tremble. Gwynzer and Samzi did too. The darkness didn’t help, Samzi’s small glowrod wasn’t enough to tell them what was up there. The medic made his mind up and stepped forward, helping Gwynzer roll Ati’s corpse over the edge and they both hurried back to collect their equipment.

“Don’t take anymore than you need,” whispered Gwynzer, “Medpack, blaster and some power packs we may need to act fast and I don’t want to be weighed down.”

Samzi nodded, already packing away what he needed and throwing off anything superfluous. Gwynzer activated another UAV and checked the rest of the equipment available.

“Ok, I’m going to take some detpacks, the frag nades and the Bowcaster. That should give us enough firepower for anything we meet up there.” Gwynzer hefted the heavy Wookie weapon, trying to gauge its weight.

“This should make anything think twice.” He grunted. “You ready?”

Samzi nodded. “Lets get out of here.”

The UAV pinged. Then again, and again. Gwynzer checked the readout, whatever was coming for them was now registering on the sensor but he couldn’t make out exact numbers. A mass of red dots shifted and surged as he studied it and in the confines of the service tower there was no way to distinguish between those coming from above and those climbing to reach them from its dark bowels.

“Start climbing!” he ordered. Samzi didn’t need to be told twice and started at a brisk job at the ramps, Gwynzer hot on his heels. They only cleared the first corner when something pounced, jaws open and salivating. Both men opened fire, a rapid reflex born from instincts honed in combat. The thing tumbled swung from the impacts and dropped over the side. They saw enough of it for Samzi to believe everything Gwynzer had told him. No matter what the UAV scan told them, that thing should have been dead.

“Boss, how many of those things are there?”

Gwynzer shook his head, “Can’t make it out.”

“I hope these power cells hold out,” answered Samzi “theres no way out of this thing except through them.”

“I know,” came the reply, “but I have an idea.”

Gwynzer began rummaging through his kit as another ear splitting scream lunged at them through the darkness. “I’m going to blast a hole in the wall, maybe we can climb over the cliff face.”

“A detpack? In here?” Samzi wasn’t sure about the idea, “We got enough room to get away from it?”

“It’s either that or try and get through those things.”

The crushing steps were closer now and occasionally something else would clatter past them through the central shaft. Pieces of Stormtrooper armour, clothing and even bloody dripping limbs. Gwynzer slammed the explosives hard against a wall, the timer lights flashing an eery green in the closeting blackness.

“Come on,” he said grabbing Samzi, “up two more levels then hit the floor.”

They ran, counting silently in their heads trying to judge the right time to hit the cold metal floor and cover their ears. “Now!” they both cried dropping instantly and throwing their arms over the heads. The blast rocked the walkway and hot fiery air blasted up past them, dieing back as quickly as it passed. Thick smoke still clung to the confines of the heavy chamber and for a moment the brilliant light left them blinded.

They weren’t far off now perhaps two or three levels above them, slurping and grunting towards the two soldiers ears as the ranks of ravaged men advanced. The explosion seemed to excite them and the pace appeared to quicken as another scream challenged the night. Samzi and Gwynzer stood and groping the wall made their way back to check the location of the explosive charge.

A large jagged hole had opened in the side, smoke pulling out and in to the starry sky and through it they could make out the grey craggy face of the cliff.

“Think we can make it?” asked Gwynzer.

“I’d rather try that than go through those cacking monsters.” Samzi answered, already hoisting one leg through and checking a foothold. A blaster shot pinged from the wall and Gwynzer spun to track the source. One of the monsters had reached them ahead of the others and held a pistol in its arm. Its only arm. The other ended in a stump at the elbow, red angry muscle draping from it like ribbons while the remaining bone protruded in sickening contrast.

It raised the pistol and fired again missing widly. Gwynzer raised his bowcaster and aimed, bellowing at Samzi, “GO! NOW! I’ll cover you!”

Samzi continued clambering out, reaching for foot and hand holds as his Squad Leader disappeared from sight behind the towers walls, green light flashing as he opened fire against the former Imperial.

“Samzi, I’m coming through!” Gwynzer backed down the corridor towards the hole, sweeping his weapon up for more of the slavering beasts. His foot caught something soft, giving way temporarily beneath his weight before resisting and rolling off. He glanced down, it was an arm, still wet and sheathed in standard issue Alliance uniform. He spun round in horror but it was too late, he couldn’t bring the bowcaster round in time as Blind lunged for him, fingers scrabbling over his face and groping inside his open mouth. They felt cold and wet, he could taste the blood that coated them and Blind loomed over him, mouth open wide, teeth flared and saliva dripping from them.

The Rebel Squad Leader screamed. A primeval single cry as Blind reached forward and bit down on his shoulder, Gwynzer could feel the teeth sliding through muscle and jarring against the bone. He arched up trying to throw Blind off but it seemed to encourage him to bite harder, twisting his head from side to side in an effort to rip Gwynzers flesh away. His head arched back, he could make out more of them now descending down the ramp, footsteps heavy against the metal walkway as they fell on him, snarling and hungry, arms reaching out and grabbing limbs, pulling joints away from sockets with an agonising pop.

The last thing Samzi saw as he looked back through the hole was Gwynzer’s terrified eyes rolling back in their sockets.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2009, 07:10:34 pm by Twigs »
Logged

Blind3001

  • Senior Member
  • Havoc
  • ****
  • Offline
  • Posts: 358
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #13 on: October 28, 2009, 05:22:00 pm »

SWEET! I ate Gwyn!
Nice story up till now, keep it up :P
Logged

Quote
[17:14] Thomas45: Star Trek Scotsmen
[17:14] Blind3001: Scotty!
[17:15] Thomas45: beam me up gwynzer

Twigs

  • Engineer
  • **
  • Offline
  • Posts: 65
Re: First Strikers (guess others here may be interested too...)
« Reply #14 on: October 28, 2009, 05:44:54 pm »

SWEET! I ate Gwyn!
Nice story up till now, keep it up :P

Its not meant to be nice! Its meant to be a bit scary!  >:(

more to come yet. I'm no even close to finishing :/
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3
 

April 29, 2024, 03:34:41 am